The Subway Stops at Bryant Park

subwaystopsThe Subway Stops at Bryant Park
by N. West Moss
Leapfrog Press (160 pages, May 2017)

Reviewed by Clifford Garstang

The eleven stories that make up N. West Moss’s fine debut collection are linked by both their connection to New York City’s Bryant Park and their nuanced exploration of the many facets of loss.

We’re introduced to the park in the book’s sprawling opening story, “Omeer’s Mangoes.” Omeer is an immigrant from Iran who is proud of his position as the doorman of an apartment building that overlooks the park. He watches skeptically as the park is redeveloped from a dangerous haven for drug addicts and prostitutes into an improbable, vibrant community asset. And along with the park, Omeer’s own life undergoes a change for the better. He marries, he has a son, he’s promoted, and life is good. But then fortunes change and Omeer begins to deal with loss—his father dies, his wife and son pull away—which he does by seeking comfort in the park that he has come to love.

Several of the book’s stories involve a woman whose father has died or is otherwise slipping away from her. There is humor in “Sky Blue Haven,” in which one of the residents of the Bryant Park apartment building is moved to a nursing home after a fall. When his daughter comes to visit, it’s clear that he suffers from dementia (he keeps calling his wife a Nazi), made all the more poignant by his anxious apologies during moments of lucidity. Similarly, the protagonists of “Spring Peepers,” “Dad Died,” and “Next Time” are coping with the loss of their fathers, one by ruminating on the problems of aging, one by recalling the most endearing moments of her relationship with her father, one by focusing on the details of settling her father’s estate while attempting to reclaim her past.

But loss haunts other stories, as well. In “The Absence of Sound,” the protagonist discovers that his cat has died when he misses the sound of her claws on his hardwood floors. In a stunning moment, he connects this absence of sound with 9/11 when the subways stopped running beneath the library where he works. The protagonist of “Dubonnet” is an older woman still coping with the death of her husband, who now is faced with the loss of her home and freedom. She also finds comfort in the Bryant Park, accompanied by her plastic-wrapped valuables. “Milagro” is rife with loss: Benny has lost his teeth and rarely opens his mouth to speak, even when he gets false teeth because he considers them too white; when his wife leaves him, despite the new teeth, his friend Belinda gives him a chicken to keep him company; and when Belinda dies, Benny takes her dog and the two of them mourn the loss together.

Besides loss, several of the stories deal with difficult relationships. In “Patience and Fortitude,” a young woman realizes that her long-distance relationship is over when she calls her boyfriend and a woman answers. She seeks solace by the statue of Gertrude Stein in the Bryant Park. In “Beautiful Mom,” a young girl sees her mother, a model, for the first time since she walked out on the family, and their conversation is understandably strained. This girl, too, leans on the statue of Stein. In “Lucky Cat,” a college student falls for the chef in the restaurant where she works, but quickly discovers he’s not interested in a relationship. Again, Omeer in “Omeer’s Mangoes” can’t make his marriage work, and neither can Benny in “Milagro.”

Place is frequently employed as a linking mechanism in story collections, from Winesburg, Ohio and The Dubliners, to Knockemstiff and Later, at the Bar. Here, Bryant Park is used particularly effectively, because the place has much the same effect on the people who experience it. Its renaissance not only rescues the neighborhood, it provides a refuge to those who live and work in its shadow. Plus, it’s an expanding symbol—not only a park, with greenery and walking paths and benches, but also a place with regular classical music performances, public art, chess, a bar, and, as the title of the book suggests, a subway stop, connecting it to all of New York.

The stories themselves are mostly quiet, without melodramatic conflict. They are about inner demons, rather than external villains, and because of this they are highly relatable. On the whole, the collection is an intimate portrait of real people, characters bound by the park.

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The Guy We Didn’t Invite to the Orgy, and other stories

ebenbachThe Guy We Didn’t Invite to the Orgy, and other stories
by David Ebenbach
University of Massachusetts Press (254 pages, January 2017)

Reviewed by N. West Moss


David Ebenbach’s humor, his mix of empathy and intellect all come across loud and clear in his new short story collection, The Guy We Didn’t Invite to the Orgy. These stories, out of all of his six published books to date, are most effervescently indicative of the man behind the writing.

The title story is a send-up of everyone’s fear that something cool is happening and they are not invited. While readers naturally relate to the uninvited guy, Ebenbach’s narrator is the orgy organizer, so readers are forced to see the dilemma from his point of view. He isn’t sure why he neglected to invite this one actually pretty good guy. He says, “It’s just that, when you’re putting an orgy together, you have this sense that you’d better not invite every single last person on earth.” Thus, a fraught transaction is rendered benign. Everyone’s a good guy, the organizer, the uninvited. It’s a hilarious story that leaves readers feeling like maybe it doesn’t matter whether we’re invited or not.

This worry about fitting in is explored further, and from a different angle, in “Eleven Girls.” Even with eleven girls who think 15-year-old Josh is “cute,” Josh is in torment. Every time he sees Vicki (a girl he turned down awkwardly for a date) at Independence Village, for instance, he wants to “stab himself to death with his fake bayonet.” There is no simple calculation when it comes to social interaction.

In the breathtaking “Everyone around Me,” the narrator is about to give a presentation of his paintings at an artists’ colony. As he watches others present before him, he says, “I wanted everyone around me to fail.” He fantasizes about stepping into the void left by these failures, being gracious and humble, his success in direct relation to their failure. He also “wanted to be the one who succeeded in making [them] feel better about” their failures. There is, however, real pathos in how much he loves everyone else’s work, even as he’s hoping their presentations will tank. He likes them tremendously, even though as one woman shared poems she’d written, his “desire for her to fail approached the level of prayer.” When he finally presents his work, it is fulfilling in a way he hadn’t expected. Everyone comes up to him afterwards and in various ways says, “We are the same.” It’s enormously moving.

Ebenbach pushes himself out of his comfort zone in this collection as well. In “Hunting Gathering” he writes from the point of view of a young woman. While humor prevailed here (as it does throughout), her voice rang startlingly true. The narrator describes a man arriving at a retreat who “was already displaying Male Pattern Lecturing, and starting his sentences with ‘What you have to do’.” The humor doesn’t negate the veracity, though. Just a page later, the narrator observes that “Women are trained to do everything they can to talk men out of the few sacrifices men are willing to make.” The tone here, and elsewhere in the collection, is humorous but surprisingly pithy.

His stories are told from many different points of view (a young woman, a teenage boy working at a theme park, an African-American husband, a sex worker) without ever giving the sense that the author is trying to co-opt their stories, but rather is trying to inhabit them. That’s a tough needle to thread, and one serious writers are forced to consider. Ebenbach doesn’t try to use these voices to flatter or stereotype, but rather seems to be trying to understand worlds near, but outside of, his own. He looks for the humanity in his characters, using a tone that is utterly (blessedly) devoid of contempt.

There are more experimental pieces here too, such as the barber who doesn’t know when to stop cutting in “We’ll Finish When We’re Done.” The breadth of style, character and tone give the sense of a writer at play, enjoying his own ability, and enjoying also getting to know the characters he’s bringing forth.

It’s an enormously lovable collection of stories that explores the alienation that most people feel, but attempts to resolve it, showing that in the end “We are all the same,” if only because we all feel ourselves to be on the outside looking in.

N. West Moss is the author of The Subway Stops at Bryant Park from Leapfrog Press. Find out more at

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Heritage of Smoke

By: Josip Novakovich
Paperback: 256 pages
Publisher: Dzanc Books (January 10, 2017)

Reviewed by: Vickie Fang

This is a collection of gloriously transgressive extremes. People kill each other in this book — and sometimes eat the corpse. They rise from their death bed to celebrate life by assaulting their loved ones. They turn sexual energy into a weapon that can destroy cities. They use a dead sea scroll to roll a cigarette. They smile when the twin towers come down, adoring “The sight of all that smoke as though witnessing the epiphany of an angry God.” What is glorious in these transgressions? The dizzying transformations. Life becomes death, which sometimes becomes life again. We watch as the past and the future, the murderer and his victim become one. Ordinary reality is transformed by inventive and lyrical prose. “He beat the coffee beans into Turkish dust in an iron cup with a round-headed piece of iron, which looked like a bone, the head of a child’s femur. The metal rang dull under the crunch of the beans. Branko sprinkled the coffee powder into boiling water as though scattering ashes and the intoxicating smell of black dust wafted through the room.” The specter of death and the longing for resurrection lurk beneath a startling range of stories that include ghosts, thieves and transients, a great scientist, slaughtered Muslims, and many ordinary people struggling to make their way in a painful world.

Dutch Treat is the story of Martin, an idealistic U.N. peacekeeper whose initial actions and subsequent failure to act help to cause the death of 8,000 innocent people. Told in a straight forward, and, unfortunately, historically accurate manner, the story describes Martin’s childhood fascination with the United Nations building where “All that glass reflecting the gold of the setting sun struck him as splendid, even more so than the World Trade Tower’s apparent silverworks.” Volunteering for Bosnia, Martin soon realizes two things, that both the people and the buildings are more damaged than they seem, and that his mission was “a show.” Feeling like an actor, he parades his healthy, muscular body through town while grinding his teeth. He and his fellow soldiers do nothing when the Muslims they’ve disarmed are murdered in a soccer stadium, despite the fact that, “Soccer is equal to tulips and windmills as a symbol of Dutch life, and that the Serbs would chose a soccer stadium for this seemed like an additional insult. But what was an insult in the face of mass murder?” The unreality of Martin’s thinking and life become even worse when he meets a survivor of the massacre in New York and attempts to make amends. The shame Martin has tried to leave behind comes back to destroy him in a chilling and unexpected conclusion. Martin, the idealistic and accidental murderer, has become his own victim, bent on revenge.

In When the Saints Come, Davor “Had been wheezing for days and he gasped in his sleep and talked about Armageddon, global warming, and the vanished Boeing 777. Even awake, he talked about the 777 as the ascension airplane — all the people onboard went straight to heaven and the rest remained on the ground, awaiting the wraith of God.” Davor, who has not been religious since his childhood, soon discovers that he has lung cancer, and as with his initial rantings about God and the 777, his reawakening faith is curiously mixed with literal, earthly concerns as well as a surging sense of beauty and loss. “Now he saw the world differently and loved the forest flowers whose names he didn’t know, some white like little bells, others blue, yellow, purple. After a dreary, colorless winter, the ground had burst in the full spectrum of a rainbow, as though it had become the heavens, and who’s to say it hadn’t, as our earth is part of the celestial harmony?”

He goes to Jerusalem, experiencing the sun, the oranges, the olives, the soldiers with machine guns, the gold-covered chapel, only to lose faith in Christianity, and, preemptively, Judaism and Islam as well. After calculating the value of the gold on the Dome on the Rock, Davor imagines that “The soil contained the blood of more than a million pilgrims, Muslims, and Jews fighting for that square kilometer of arid land.”  He rejects religion, largely on logical, humanistic grounds, but also loses his sense  of joy and much of what was left of his health. “As morning doves began to coo on his roof, announcing the thinning of the night, dispersing the darkness (where did it all go, where could it hide in this universe that is mostly darkness?), .  .   . he could not get out of bed, could not lift his head.”

For the rest of the story, Davor wrestles, expansively, with the unanswerable questions of life. In the end “He lay for three days and three nights and then died with a mysterious half-smile on his thin blue lips, his blue eyes pale like the spring sky, irises only, with tiny and hazed-over pupils, reduced to milky black dots bleeding into the blue.” Heritage of Smoke boldly explores a world in which change is the only constant, and in which great beauty coexists with losses that are transformed but can never be escaped. It’s an exciting and unsettling read.

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The Intersection

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By: Brad Windhauser
Published by: Black Rose Writing

Reviewed by: Abigail Shaffer

What strikes me most about this multi point-of-view novel is the care, balance, and grace of the details. The Intersection follows the lives of several residents of a rapidly-gentrifying South Philly neighborhood, as pressure co                         mpounds between the new and existing residents over the direction and inevitable development the neighborhood will take. The tensions bubble to the surface when an African American cyclist is struck at a central intersection by a white driver, with the only witness a young girl on her way home from school. As the cyclist fights for his life in the hospital, the energy of the community begins to foment in ways that Rose, longtime resident and hopeful optimist more likely to see a brutal wind as “God’s leafblower” than a negative challenge, fears the growing discord will irrevocably damage the neighborhood forever. Inclined towards a desire for harmony, and with bravery that tests her strength and belief in herself, Rose boldly organizes a community meeting at a newly-opened hipster bar situated in the heart of the roiling neighborhood. It is at this meeting where broader community concerns – will the old residents’ ways of life get left behind, will the new residents ever be accepted and feel at home, will the community come together and thrive – blend together, bound by the very private and personal fears, hopes, and aspirations of the individuals making up the community.
This blending of individual concerns into a interwoven tapestry of community desires also exemplifies another strength of the novel. There are no literal black-and-whites here, no harsh dichotomies. Rather, Windhauser illuminates the greys. Nothing is as simple as the surface impressions but is impacted, and is, in fact, driven by what lies underneath. Nathan, a longtime resident, supports the change because he hopes the new direction will bring in money and improvements that will mean better schools and care for his son. Carol, the mother of the cyclist, does not want her son to be made into a symbol and used to further either side’s agenda – she just wants him home, safe, and alive. At the same time, the white driver, Michael, questions his decision to purchase a home in the neighborhood for more personal reasons than even he is aware, until a fateful pre-dawn walk through the sleeping community.
Change, and how people adapt or resist to change, is another theme throughout the novel, as is the subtle strength of Windhauser’s creation of character. Shaping character often involves nuance, and the strength of Windhauser’s fleshing out of characters lies in the deftness of detail. It is in the detail of imagery and language that we come to know his characters, through the feeling of cracked pleather on Nathan’s legs as he grapples with omnipresent fears of how he will care, as a single parent, for his special needs son. We get to know the characters intimately through how they fold clothes at the laundry mat, through how they make their way in the grey morning light, through how the soil from a newly-potted plant feels on the palms of their hands. No heavy-handed stock characters here: dear Rose with her empathy and infinite kindness wrought from tragedy; Michael shadowed by guilt, betrayal, and isolation; Carol with her past finally circling round while she struggles to cope with her son’s critical injury — these individuals’ experiences and deep private pain coalesce in a sense of shared humanity, of commonality. We get to know, we feel, their private pain and how, underneath their public personas, a well of emotions, experiences, and desires simultaneously feeds and drains the characters as they traverse their merging paths.

Editor’s note: Abigail Shaffer’s novel, Children of the Country, was recently reviewed in Best New Fiction.

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The Fall of Lisa Bellow

lisa-bellowThe Fall of Lisa Bellow
by Susan Perabo
Simon & Schuster, March 14, 2017
352 pages

Reviewed by Clifford Garstang

Susan Perabo’s new novel, The Fall of Lisa Bellow, is more than another story about a missing teenager. It’s about vision, what we choose to see, and what we ignore. Ultimately, it’s about facing facts.

Meredith Oliver is a perfectly ordinary kid, an eighth grader who is good at math, who hangs with her fellow nerds from school, is barely noticed by the cool girls except to be ridiculed for one fault or another. But when Meredith witnesses the kidnapping of popular classmate Lisa Bellow during the robbery of a local sandwich shop, she is pulled into a completely different orbit. Now Lisa’s friends are her friends. Now popular styles are her styles. Now her flaws make her unique instead of outcast.

Meredith’s life at home changes, as well. Her parents, worried that the robbery and Lisa’s disappearance have traumatized her, are at a loss. They hire a therapist. They indulge Meredith’s whims—new shoes, her favorite foods—and insist on keeping constant watch over her.

But Meredith’s trauma isn’t the only tragedy the family is dealing with. Older brother Evan, who at Meredith’s age blossomed from a pudgy kid into a star athlete, has lost sight in one eye when hit by a baseball. After the injury, he mopes and medicates, but at least he can relate to his sister. When Meredith suffers the post-traumatic effects of what she’s seen, Evan re-emerges. Despite his visual impairment, and over his mother’s objections, he begins to work out again—running, taking batting practice, tossing and catching a ball. He plans to rejoin the baseball team, but doesn’t face the reality of what has happened to him. Having vision in only one eye changes his perception, and catching the ball is nearly impossible.

Meanwhile, Claire and Mark, Meredith’s parents, are struggling, too. Mark just wants everyone to be happy. He’s supportive of both kids, despite their limitations. Claire, though, is more of a realist. She knows that Evan will never be able to play baseball again. And she knows how deeply affected Meredith is by what has happened. The problem is that she lacks the tools she needs to comfort either of her children. That creates tension for the entire family and drives a wedge between her and her husband.

Failures of vision draw the family together, even if they don’t realize it. Evan, literally, has only partial vision that obscures what he might be able to accomplish. Mark cannot or won’t see the dangers that threaten his children and his marriage. Claire perceives those dangers all too clearly but can’t see a way to avoid them. And what of Meredith?

The experience Meredith shares with Lisa Bellow gives her a kind of second sight, or so she believes. Lisa’s mother, desperate to find her daughter, insists that Meredith must have seen something at the sandwich shop that can help the police. What Meredith actually saw is of no help, but there’s something else. Now, after the fact, she can see Lisa with her abductor—in an apartment, with a dog named Annie. The scene she sees—or is she imagining it?—is so vivid, it must be real, she thinks. It’s almost as if she’s there, sharing the experience.

Perabo’s novel is gripping, not only because the reader wants to find out what has happened to Lisa Bellow, but also because Meredith’s reaction to the kidnapping raises so many questions about her own stability, and the stability of her family. This isn’t just a suspense thriller, although it’s that, too. It’s an intense psychological study of a girl in the process of discovering how to cope with the real world.


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Stony River

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by Tricia Dower
Leapfrog Press, 2016
294 Pages

Reviewed by Clifford Garstang

Part coming of age tale, part crime drama, part psychological thriller, Tricia Dower’s Stony River is one of the best books I’ve read this year.

Set during the late 1950s in a small New Jersey town, the novel tells the stories of three girls from three very different families whose lives become intertwined in unexpected ways. Linda, from a suffocatingly strict home with a hard-working father and a neurotic mother, is unpopular at school and struggles with her weight. When Tereza moves into an apartment across the street with her abusive mother and stepfather, the girls begin spending time with each other, despite being very different. Whereas Linda is timid and inexperienced with boys, Tereza, small and beautiful and extroverted, uses sex to earn the money and attention she doesn’t get at home. During one of their secret outings together, the girls witness the police entering an old house and exiting with a girl about their age and a toddler in custody. This girl is Miranda, who is in some ways the most stable of the three girls, even though she’s been kept a virtual prisoner in her house by her father, who is also the father of her child.

As Dower unfolds her story, we see that all three girls, products of their respective unhealthy environments, are intent on finding refuge. Lonely Linda finds solace in junk food. Tereza runs away from her family with hopes of becoming an actress and ends up married to a moody and unhinged devotee of Charles Atlas. Miranda, after her father’s death, is first comforted by the Catholic Church, but later resorts to her father’s mysterious healing practices, work that restores her connection to the spirits of both her deceased parents and their Irish homeland.

Meanwhile, the town of Stony River suffers from a series of unsolved crimes—a cop killing, a young woman murdered, another kidnapped, several attempted abductions. All three of the girls may have information that will help police find the killers. All three are reluctant to tell what they know.

Ultimately, the novel is about a time and place that wasn’t as innocent as we remember. Perhaps Linda’s mother is not so wrong to confine her daughter and to shield her from the influence of girls like Tereza. Or, at the other extreme, is the freedom Tereza’s mother allows the right approach to raising a child? And what of Miranda’s father, who taught her reverence for both books and the traditional ways of his heritage, but also used that heritage as an excuse to impregnate her.

As the novel races to a climax, it’s hard to know where to place one’s sympathies. The reader wants all these girls to be safe, to find the refuge they crave, but it’s ultimately not clear that this is possible, in the novel or in real life.

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Children of the Country


By: Abigail Shaffer
Paperback: 262 pages
Publisher: Outpost19 (November 1, 2016)

Reviewed by: Vickie Fang

Abigail Shaffer, the author of this novel, is a former social worker with roots in the Ozarks, and her background transforms what could have been just another Southern Gothic into a unique work of art.  While Children of the Country  has plenty of poverty and bad food, run away daddies, and swampland hoodoo, it is also peopled by very real, three dimensional characters who struggle with the kinds of hopes and difficulties many writers overlook. The fifteen year old heroine, Cindy Rae, fights for her heart’s desire — a spot in an academic class instead of more vocational tech. “Well, that’s awful ambitious, don’t you think?” is her advisor’s response. Therein follow two pages of tense sexual politics and gathering rage before she emerges, triumphant, with permission to take trigonometry.  Cindy is hungover, and poor, and consorting with dangerous people, but she is also becoming aware of what she wants to do with her life and of what she needs to do to get from where she is to where she wants to be. That she has to fight so hard to be placed into what is the most appropriate math class is a powerful illustration of just how hard her journey will be.

Cindy’s older brother Ricky, on the other hand, is wandering from one rash act to another. When he almost fumbles a chance to become a regular drug courier, Ricky and a friend swear “solemnly, their promise sealed with shots of Wild Turkey, to thoroughly get their heads out of their asses in light of the amount of cash.” Both boys manage, for a while, to make money in a world of muddy back roads, drunken parties, and men with automatic weapons. Though they play out against a lush and sweltering backdrop, the mechanisms of white rural drug dealing appear to be remarkably similar to the depictions of black, urban dealing. The hopelessness is the same too. This is Ricky’s boss, who has failed to make amends with a woman from his past.

All at once he needs to get gone, and wishes he’d tucked his Gobbler under the seat for the long ride home. He looks once at the kids, nodding before backing down the sidewalk, then eases his bum leg and his bum self into his Jeep, thinking of the liquor store he passed on Chicot and how time and remembrance fold over and back in on themselves, in cahoots and thoroughly against him.

Life is hard for  middle aged people who end up here; not even righteous violence is pleasurable. Methodically, his fists feel the connection to flesh, the momentary cushion of it, then the hardness of bone. His own knuckles bloodied, raw, he keeps swinging, nice initial heavy pounding. The cheek gives as the bone underneath shatters and the skin sinks in, like the depression of earth over a wooden coffin in oldtime graveyards, the weight of soil finally bearing down. . . He’d always imagined there’d be more of a reckoning at the end.

Although in the course of this novel, they never leave their home, Ricky and Cindy Rae meet their different fates. Their love never waivers, though. They take joy in each other, in the physical beauty of the world around them, and in their own small hopes for the future. This is Ricky after having cleared the air with his sister. In a flash he is eight and Cindy Rae is five, and they are walking to the bus in the high heat of the asshole end of August, her quiet as hell, but beaming up with that pirate smile she had even as a bitty baby, her pudgy fist, sweaty and soft, nestled in his left hand. She was always the morning sun to him, the color of her baby room with the fairy princess crap and that yellow, raggedy stuffed bird she probably still has and sleeps with if he knows a goddamn thing about anything.

Children of the Country is a beautiful book that depicts a hard way of life without ever condescending to the characters or losing sight of their humanity.

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